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What is hiding in an empty box?

So… something from my travels that I chanced to see:
the message in a fortune cookie, handed to me.

“What is hiding in an empty box?”

It only took about a minute
Then I knew what could be in it

What is hiding in an empty box?
Nothing, and everything, that time unlocks

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  • Gods child40 silver member
    January 10
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    the pic fits the poem, great job!!


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    January 10

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    From nothing to everything,
    what a span. all accomplished
    --or vanished--by love.

    Drama in that box, ahhyeah!

    Aes


  • bluesky
    January 10
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    i loved it i like how you dident tell eneyone intill you get to the picher.

  • Yes..a great picture you haver taken to bring the message accross..my friend..and your timing of the words is just perfect..well done..