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Zany Zebra Xylophone Zoo

In a place near timbuctoo,
There happens to be a popular zoo,
The only animal in it is a zebra called Bart,
Who has his musical stylings to a fine art,
Playing his xylophone to everyone's delight,
Though people can't fathom, try as they might,
How he can play this to his visiting chums,
When to hold the sticks, he lacks opposing thumbs.

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A poor attempt at the challenge, I know! My head fzzzted part way through. Thankyou Lady Pegasus for sparing the time for these games again!

Your next challenge is... Radically Rhyming Annoying Alliteration!

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  • Lady-Pegasus
    February 2

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    actually

    i think it was cute, well done my friend! I am sorry it has taken so long to respond, RL and all u know how it is :S
    As to my challenge, well, i hope you don';t mind if i cheat a bit , u see I already have a few pieces that fit this challenge haha:
    http://allpoetry.com/poem/2805682

    well hell i canna find the one that is even better, but this will do for now!

    As to your challenge, I want a COHESIVE, comprehensible poem that uses no words with less than 4 letters in them, and no hyphenating to make it work!
    MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA