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******* Placed in the sky for a watchful eye *******
******* concerned about the ways of love. *******
******* Time, a void in space, filling peace of mind *******
******* by a Spirit proclaiming I above all. *******
******* It is in this proclamation, nations are formed, worshipping, *******
******* and giving praise, seeking forgiveness and salvation while *******
******* living in an unforgiving world. Although we battle amongst *******
******* ourselves imposing goodwill toward each other, progress *******
******* cannot be made while moving backwards. To be without *******
******* time, would be being without Heaven and being without *******
******* Heaven would be being without God. *******
******* How could such a place exist? *******
Author notes
Quote Prompt:
Time is to slow for those who wait, too swift for those who fear,
too long for those who grieve, too short for those who rejoice,
but for those who love, time is eternity."
~Henry Van Dyke~
In a list
A contest entry
- Going Crazy Want to Join Me by Starz of Heaven.
1000 points, ended January 15, 13 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments Greatly Appreciated
Comments
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ah time, it is a funny old thing, - on a personal level, of all of us, not just me, if one is happy, then time zooms along with a carefree smile, but when we are sad it lingers and stretches itself, as a race, as we mentioned before in commenting, we must find the balance and not be too quick to reach a goal.
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I don't think people love hate. I liked your poem with all the little ****. Good luck to you in the contest.
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Your Quote:
Time is too slow for those who wait, too swift for those who fear, too long for those who grieve, too short for those who rejoice, but for those who love, time is eternity. ~Henry Van Dyke
Good luck
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