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Your not dieing!

Do your words of your soul destroy you
you never cried when you sad or laugh when you happy.
You stand in a world felled with sadness and death.
you know your dieing so you kill your self before hand

Stop!!!
you got to live your life.
Don't think to hard and do what you want.
I want you do be happy and die happy.
You can only cry happy.

Stop!!!
Don't lie to yourself
Don't bet yourself up before death.
You got to live your life.
So stop the cry and believe your not dieing.

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