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Mortality

Raging this river

Places yet known

Carry and deliver

All that yet owned

 

Merging and leaving

Streams come and go

Rapids changing constantly

Revealing places to go

 

All through the seasons

And weathers of change

Flowing for reasons

Which God does arrange....

 

c2009 vduna

Author notes

In memory of Joseph Webb Jauary 6 2009 and Eiji Baba December 18 2001. You are loved and missed.

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  • cindyloo
    January 9

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    This is deep. Each time I read it, I peel off a layer and get a deeper meaning from it. I love poems that make you want to read it over and over. The imagery is breathtaking. I really like your style of writing. I am very sorry for your losses.


  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    January 9

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    Very wonderful. The imagery is intense...and the emotion fills it to a certain completeness. Nicely done, and beautifully dedicated.

    ~Love and Light~
    Raymond