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It Hurts

It hurts when the world fades to gray
It hurts when you have never been loved or in love
It hurts when life feels like walking through a snowdrift
It hurts when you pretend to be happy
It hurts when the razor kisses your skin
It hurts when people stare
It hurts when nobody knows your name
It hurts when you're cranking the music up full blast
It hurts when it becomes impossible to get through the day
It hurts when depression is your only friend
It hurts to sleep alone in a bed that feels more like a coffin
It hurts to die alone when you've been there all your life
It hurts to cry until you have no tears left
It hurts to become a ghost in your life.

Lots of things hurt, but living hurts the most. 

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  • XxXEmoRainbowXxX
    November 28
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    Wow

    I feel tht alot of times
    it moved me
    his is relly good

  • brilliant! the 2nd to last line has to be my favourite 'it hurts to become a ghost in your life'. just genius words. So much emotion, it sent shivers up my spine. I can relate to this so so well.
    Each word just hit me so hard because it was like i wrote this myself. You have so much talent. i hope that in time we become friends because i think that we have so much in common and can really relate to eachother. keep up the brilliant work hun x


  • phynix
    January 9

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    "It hurts when you have never been loved or in love"
    it does hurt to never have been loved, but it hurts a lot to be in love.
    "It hurts when people stare "
    at least if they stare you kno they notice you, and even tho u may not believe it, it's much better than being invisible.
    "Lots of things hurt, but living hurts the most."
    Living may hurt the most, but don't forget the great moments your life has given you.


    • Cry Wolf
      January 9
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      Thank you so much for your kind words, Phynix I try to remember the good things, but it becomes harder and harder every day.


  • JillyBeaner
    January 9

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    its worse when your in love with someone who doesn't love you back...your free from that grief at least

  • Pain is a part of life one day love will find you if your poem is on that is about love but yes pain is all it shall go away on its on just never hurt urself in return to stop it all
    but ...
    keep up the good work


  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 9

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    they say..

    that's how you know, you're alive..be strong my friend..mentally and emotionally..this can't last forever..

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