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Kiss Me

 
 
 
open    wide
with a laugh and a smile
 bright red from lipstick and too many kisses
 just a hint of darting tongue; drawing you to me
 the shine of promise darkening the shadows on my bottom lip
(toying with danger and what's left of your dignity
waiting for the moment) my lips meet yours again
unknowingly bringing all my schemes together
 hot breaths mingling heat rushes my skin
 as you submit and find these ties
setting me free
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Author notes

I wrote this for a shapes contest, but decided it was bit hot for an all ages contest. If my shape is really that terrible, it's supposed to be lips. I used courier because each letter and space is the same width, but it kind of makes it look. . . not as good. Hmm.

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  • PastelMoons gold member
    July 22

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    Love This!!!

    "the shine of promise darkening the shadows on my bottom lip"--
    Just some of the remarkable imagery
    and word choices that I fell in love with.
    I enjoyed reading you,
    thank you for sharing.

    ~Pastel