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The Phoenix

Tired of the way you talk to me
those demeaning words you so often scream
I've done nothing to deserve this
the way you always put me down
I will no longer take your abuse
this pain I shall leave behind
like the Phoenix from the ashes
I WILL RISE AGAIN.

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  • Daire
    January 23

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    This has the air of real determination about it. I hope that you've left it if it's about a real relationship you were in. This has a great opening two lines. Pretty inspirational.


  • upperworld06
    January 9
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    Hope and overcoming, nice job with this, good luck in the contest