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Why

As my head hits my pillow, I lay there in silence.
Thoughts constantly running through my mind.
One thought persistant to re-enter.
Why?!?! what were you thinking?
A child only a couple months old
wont eat her food, cant eat her food!
Why did you hit her?
Didnt you know that babies cry?
you tried to stop it
by throwing her on the bed.
Who knows the damage you could have caused.
Years pass by but the abuse doesnt stop
What were you thinking that awful night?
As you leave your child
not only physically but emotionally scarred.
what pleasure does it bring you knowing it ruins her life?
Please just answer me
What were you thinking?

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Just my thoughts late at night while i am trying to fall asleep.

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  • eternalsol
    May 11
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    wow powerful

    i could not imagen how painful that was but hey what does not kill us makes us stronger


    • dmn052390
      May 12
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      thanks, and honestly it has made me not only a stronger person but a better person. I cant help what happened but i know i can make the most out of it. Thank you so much for the nice comment.


  • Ademon
    March 9

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    That's truly horrible what you have gone through and truly makes me feel my own troubles insignificant compared to yours...and for you to still be there for your family and trying to help them out...you're truly a stronger person than I shall ever be...this is a very sad and dark poem...


  • Daire
    January 25

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    I love the opening lines, "As my head hits my pillow/I lay there in silence." I sincerely hope that you weren't the baby in this poem though.

    • dmn052390
      January 26
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      thank you... and unfortunatly this was from experience...


      • Daire
        January 27
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        I'm sorry to hear that but I hope that writing poems like this helps you to deal with it.

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