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Echos Etched in Time

Etched in stone, verdant memories.
Echoes from a past, I still can see.
The artisans scribing, on cold slabs,
Marked long ago, by their hands.
Encrypted messages, on the walls.
Victorious wins, and dreadful falls.
Tales of bravery, in the face of battles.
Historic claims, in the ancients annals.
Pictorial grafts, chiseled define.
Chariots race, through the sands of time.
By the order of a hierarchy's will.
Scribes left behind, these murals filled.
With lessons learned, from the ancients.
A course clear, despite times estrangement.  
  

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  • Grateful
    January 10, 2009

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    this is a wonderful poem...brilliant and delightful...i really enjoyed it...thank you so much for writing a timeless poem....all the best...


  • Malabu
    January 9, 2009

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    absolutly a script etched to the pages of fine poety

    something i can never accomplish myself
    this shines

    mal


  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 9, 2009

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    Now this gives one much to think about...nicely done...very interesting and touches on so many things...love the ending...

    thank you for sharing!

    mystic


  • maralisa silver member
    January 9, 2009

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    aw wow a brilliant take on the promt your imagery is delightful good luck inthe contestmaralisa