So many years ago in Georgetown
chased by rain right into a doorway
that bore your name, silk, passion
and champagne.
A contest entry
- Short Love Poems (PW'S OPEN ) by misticmoonlite.
650 points, ended January 12, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Touch me back
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Beautiful. Leave me wanting to know more about the story. Excellent.
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Beautiful write, there must be some wonderful memories of Georgetown.
Best wishes in the contest
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WELL penned
love can be found in the matter of a quick blink and you found the form rather well...thank you for this entry, good luck in my contest,,
gonna be a tough one lol
MM
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Fascinating....short and simple..yet complex and intricate! Nicely written. The imagery in this is excellent...I pictured a person in the rain...who stumbles upon a random doorway seeking shelter...and meeting the love of their life...an instand bond of love at first sight!
~Love and Light~
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Wow!!!
A pretty little poem. Best wishes in the contest.
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Just beautiful. Very romantic. Best wishes in the contest.
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Excellent! One of best!
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Poet
And so love was found. The rain must have been lke a balm that brought on the passion and love.
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