[rock on, kiddo]
you say this music
the kind you like so much
the kind you play so often -
you say this music
is called rock. [i don't think something should be named
after such a solid object
if it hardly lands with a thud]
you say this music
is called rock -
and you say you play this
to make me smile. [well i can tell you, it ain't working]
the doctors say this music
is the last hope. they say that
after this, we can do nothing. [i believe them]
you say, we can never just do
'nothing.' you say that music
is everything. [and yet, i don't get it...]
you say this 'rock,'
this music, makes you feel
alive. [it ain't working. you say, it's a drum,
it's a heartbeat, it's a soul...
i feel nothing. rock on, kid]
you play until your fingers
are furrowed by the strings
until the music runs out
and the day runs in.
[let me tell you, kid, it ain't working. just
give up]
but you say, you just can't give up.
not when there's still music.
[well let me tell you again; give up.
if you want me to hear,
you'll have to rock a lot harder]
Author notes
Option 3
i have no idea.
A contest entry
- once again - 4 OPTIONS (PW ALLOWED) by Rhythm Child.
400 points, ended January 24, 2009, 48 entries
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