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Always&_Forever.

I've told you your beauty will live for an eternity
But you said that could never be

I've spoke of loving you forever
And you would answer that's impossible for me

I promised you'd never be forgotten
And you said that could not be true

You told me since we are all mortal
one day our memories will be through

So I wrote today this poem about our love and then I realized
Since paper can live forever, our love has become imortalized

I expressed our love so vivid, now it's clear for everyone to see
That deep inside our hearts, together we will always be

Now I'll ask you when our love will end, and you'll happily say "never"
I titled the poem eternity, because our love will live forever.

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    April 6

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    this is a beautiful love write from you and i wish you well in these contests that you have entered. viyanna rosemarie


    • L.v.
      April 8
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      thank you so much =] I'm glad you enjoyed it.


  • Reanna Eryn
    April 6

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    This brought out so much emotion, and a very good point. What's written down is forever, and forever will never end.


  • purplemoon
    January 19

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    LOVE IT!

    WOW this is a very powerful poem and so very true. you are right about love living forever even if it's not on paper altough it is a good way to preserve it. You did wonderful. BRAVO