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People say
“Beauty is in the eye of the beholder”
then turn around and critique you based on society’s eyes
Society’s shallow stereotypical sexist staring eyes
But wise people will tell you
“The oppressor can only gain control over the oppressed with the oppressed’ consent” 
and leave it at that
 

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You do have beautiful features (skin, eyes, long neck, high cheekbones) that I was going to add in but I liked it like this.

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  • Thank you for your inspiring and profound entry, and for your lovely comments also, good luck in my contest, Josie