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Alone

When people tell me
I'm not alone
I already know that's a lie
In fact,
Often times this lonelyness
Makes me wish to die
And the main thing from stopping me
From taking my useless thing I call my life
Is I cant find the words to tell him goodbye..

What do you think and have you ever felt this way? if not did i connect to you at all..and btw there really is someone making me feel this way.

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  • The Cube
    January 8

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    Very sad. But for the most part I feel a lot of people could relate to this. In my opinion, it, in a sense, puts a different perspective on a suicide attempt. While most attempts are a desperate cry for help or selfishness and an act for attention, this is more personal with the person reaching for another's feelings, as though not all has been forgotten. Pretty much it says even though I want to take my life, I can not do so until everything is as it should be.

    A very good write.

    Dr. Cube