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Liquid Embrace

Rain drops as they flow down the wet locks
Clinging to the softness of her skin
Remain mesmerized blushing deeply;
Crushed tormented within the grasping arms.

Lips in faint quivers explore moments
Spreading warmth to our cushioned embrace
Melting each heart to the others touch
Oblivious of the cold surroundings.

Hold me clasped swaying in your joys of love;
I seek comfort in your craving warmth.     

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image credits:

Love picture - couple hugging in the rain, by orangeacid
obtained from
http://www.lovepicturesoflove.net/

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  • poet2angels gold member
    January 8

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    Beautifully written!

    I love the ending:

    "Hold me clasped swaying in your joys of love;
    I seek comfort in your craving warmth. "

    Lovely imagery and metaphor!
    TY for sharing!

    Lynda