A whisper of a crushed, broken heart in despair
Deep darken soul howls in pain, like the broken hollow wind
No one hears or sees the tears sprinkling on her pale cheeks
Wonders of loves first lies comes,nothing compares to betray of trust
Real heart pounding love comes from inner parts hidden by mere flesh
Love is not empty,flat feeling coming from the fear of being alone
One person keeps telling false hoods to cover the hidden shame of failure
Now the rut of the hidden cycle of pure unhappiness sets in to the soul
A contest entry
- 8-Line Poems by Daire.
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Comments
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This has a brilliant title and opening line. The closing line also offers a devastating conclusion.
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Wow,
What a well expressed piece here you have penned my dear sis, I'm sad to read this is a personal write.
You deserve tears of joy only, for you really are an earth angel to me. I love ya sis, and I appreciate all the love you have ever shown me. If ya need me, I'm here for ya! -hugs- 
Love brother Timothy
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