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-----of my personal world

Make me a bird
not to skip away
from my bounden responsibilities
but to flee away
from the stinking human values

Make me a bird
to sing a song
melodiously
to reach the heart
of the supreme lord!

Make me a bird
to add wings afresh
to all my innovative thoughts
to work in unison only
to put them into practice

Make me a bird
to fly high into the skies
with my aesthetic urge
to meet the philosophical need
of my personal world

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 9

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    Yes..to some exrtent we can call it a philosophical need...but at the same time it is more personnel need as well..very well scripted piece...