firmament is domain
fluttering through the wind.
stay as a guest on earth
enjoy the bounty,
leaving without remorse.
crosses continents
taking messages.
why it flies,
is mystery, just does it.
a simple nest for siblings
accepts nature's offerings,
sits on lonely rock,
a silent monk envy.
sings on edges of a tree branch,
melody queen begrudge.
how many times, I wished,
to be a carefree bird,
touching the blue skies,
making light of myself.
leaving burdens
like birds excreta.
A contest entry
- make me a bird... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended January 22, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Yes..we all wants to be the bird,,,a free bird but time and again this wish remains as the wish..the heart is seen with refernce to the curiosity to find HIM..well done..
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aw wow dad a brilliant take on the promt your imagery is delightful good luck inthe contest
maralisa
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This is so amazing my friend. This was so lovely to read and I loved the imagery you have used here. Well done, you should be very proud of this, all the best for the contest.
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thank you so much
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This is lovely Venu.
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thank you so much, your kindness fills my day
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You're welcome Ven.
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