Why should I sip absinthe
because it makes my head spin
when I'd rather be surrounded
by my dull things.
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie! 10-20-30 Yayness! by Cerulean Sunrise.
700 points, ended January 8, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love your mind.
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Congrats on gold!
Amazing write.
I agree.
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This is great. Congratulations on a much deserved gold
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YAY for GOLD
congrats m'dear!
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Made me smile too. -
this made me smile
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I really like where you went with this - blunt, and beyond the ignorance offering a shaky hand. Nicely done! Best wishes in the contest!
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your poetry is always so elegant. this is no exception.
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Interesting write. You seem to havea wonderful voice in these brief pieces. I understand the limits of the contest, but I'd love read this expanded to several stanzas. Very good writing!
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Great thought here dear! I hope that you
do well with this write and thanks for your
thoughts on mine!
Jeremy0826 -
Good question, great write, I really like what you did with the prompt, best of luck to you
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