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My Fish Bowl

Why should I sip absinthe

because it makes my head spin

when I'd rather be surrounded

by my dull things.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Ryno
    January 15
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    I love your mind.


  • EverxEnding silver member
    January 13
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    Congrats on gold!
    Amazing write.
    I agree.


  • Danna Hobart
    January 10
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    This is great. Congratulations on a much deserved gold

  • markgrif gold member
    January 8
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  • YAY for GOLD

    congrats m'dear!

  • markgrif gold member
    January 8
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    Made me smile too.

  • LadyUnique silver member
    January 8
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    this made me smile

  • I really like where you went with this - blunt, and beyond the ignorance offering a shaky hand. Nicely done! Best wishes in the contest!


  • charcoal
    January 8
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    your poetry is always so elegant. this is no exception.

  • Yellowdogpoetry gold member
    January 8

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    Interesting write. You seem to havea wonderful voice in these brief pieces. I understand the limits of the contest, but I'd love read this expanded to several stanzas. Very good writing!


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    January 8

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    Great thought here dear! I hope that you
    do well with this write and thanks for your
    thoughts on mine!




    Jeremy0826

  • Scyphon gold member
    January 8
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    Good question, great write, I really like what you did with the prompt, best of luck to you

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