they brush my hair
change me into a fresh gown
i'll puke and you'll
leave
darling, you are the disease
Author notes
you make me sick literally
prompt: in the spirit of non compliance, i refuse your candy
A contest entry
- Quickie! 10-20-30 Yayness! by Cerulean Sunrise.
700 points, ended January 8, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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nice
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Congratulations on the torphy. Richly deserved.
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Ah now I know why I am glad to be back, I've missed good stuff like this C
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lol! Great response to the prompt - congratulations on the trophy.
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mahaha
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Well said and good luck!
Thanks a lot for your comment on
mine. All the best to you here!
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An in-your-face presence of intensity to thought. Intriguing take on the prompt here, nicely done! Best wishes in the contest!
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Nicely written.
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