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communication breakdown, it's always the same

I wait

beginning with an A, and starting with a B

Your candy is too much for me

dangled in between the hesitation

the exacerbation

cretens we are to accept it

sure looks good though

tempting me to say what the hell

but no, I refuse to give in to more bullshit

waiting for the other shoe to fall

another small time crook making good

upon a decent woman's soul.

Author notes

Fuuuuuuck, I just know I spelled exacerbation wrong
"In the spirit of non-compliance, I refuse your candy". . .

what the hell kind of prompt is that?
LOL
Okay, have another beer Jin, and behave

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  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    January 13

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    Excellent

    A very fine write, indeed. You expressed your thoughts quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us.


  • adsaige
    January 9

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    Oh, this is the wisdom of a kooky mother, but I happen to love her anyway. And don't drink too much beer mother, unless you got some nuts to go with them...particularly peanuts...Oh, oops, I'm talking about just about every man out there...I deserve to be spanked.


    • JinSays gold member
      January 9
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      got some nuts. . . .LOL
      yeah, I gots somen of them too, but they're roling around inside my head from all that beer.
      And I dont even drink!
      lord have mercy, I didnt remember that last night
      OHMG, help me


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    January 8
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    .


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    January 8
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    I like it...
    but way above 20 words.


    • JinSays gold member
      January 8
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      It's what you get for posting a prompt like this


  • PerfectImperfection
    January 8

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    Wow - this is a very nice take on the prompt! You have a lot more than 20 words here, but it's certainly well spoken and powerful!! Best wishes!

    • JinSays gold member
      January 8

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      20 words. . . .LOL
      yeah, but didnt you see. . .everyone has to follow the rules, except Jin. . .?
      LOL
      me either, I dont care anymore though.
      Im not in it to win
      Im not sure why Im in it, but 20 words stopped somewhere in the first paragraph. .


  • charcoal
    January 8

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    beginning with an A, and staring with a B
    Your candy is too much for me


    that made me laugh (: though i have no clue what it means


    • JinSays gold member
      January 8
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      me eiher.
      but I bet before the night is over,someone will expound upon it's meaning, in great detail


  • February Moon gold member
    January 8
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    Nicely written.

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