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Walls

acidic
  bore into
  my skin

  Time's grey
  matter,
  New York City
  asphalt.

Pushing against
dead weight
walls refusing
to fall

A contest entry

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  • movedon
    January 18
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    i loved the beginning.

    my daddy lives in new york


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    January 8
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    Good imagery here.

    Best of luck


  • PerfectImperfection
    January 8

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    An intriguing and quite unique interpretation of the prompt here. Nicely done, best wishes in the contest!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    January 8

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    Great thought for this prompt
    and all the best to you with it
    in this contest!




    Jeremy0826


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    January 8

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    I like this, very free and simple

    I wish I was in NYC right now. My bff and her friends went and didn't invite me. So yeh, I kinda can relate. Thanks for sharing!

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