What the fuck have you been telling people?
That I abandoned you and left you for dead?
You meglomaniac searching for scars
to justify who you are.
Delusions of granduer, you're living in the stars
you wanted to be a vampire, well suck on this!
You always thought you kissed the right way,
sucking my lips like cocaine through a straw
you made my lips dry, I had to buy chapstick.
And when you embraced me, I felt all your weight,
and you crushed me and you brought me down.
You want to be the victim? Then step in my shoes,
tell everyone the sad case you are, that's all you ever do.
You know those nights I told you I thought you were attractive,
and then I sighed over the phone? I bet that got you up...
but the whole time I was thinking of someone else;
one of those "old guys" I like so much,
Oedipus Complex turned on its ass.
That's right: Gary Oldman, Colin Firth;
those Brits you wish you could be.
So unfortunate you live in America,
without an accent that appeals to me.
And your beard, it scratched my face,
left my cheeks chaffed,
and your unnaturally long hair got in my mouth
every time I turned my head from your gaze.
You know what? Another thing...
Go ahead and cry to your mother,
I don't care that she cussed me out,
Oh, sicker than he, sicker than she, sick as me.
Fuck her. Fuck you.
And while your at it, fuck each other,
because I know you want to.
You say I didn't support you?
Alright, okay you stupid, whiney son of a bitch
You cried over the phone to me for hours at a time,
and I listened, despite popular belief.
Jesus! You make me want to scream my bloody lungs out!
You are so awful, the rotten fruit on my table,
self afflicted, psycho, mentally unstable,
you should eat worms, you should swim with the dead
you should lick the dust from my shoe, retreat in your head.
Go away, GO AWAY! Don't talk to me anymore!
You've ruined my reputation, it can't be like before!
Everyone calls me sick, just because I loved you the way you needed,
even though I was really sick because I was sick of how you pleaded,
"Love me, love me Ashley. Do you love me? Say it now."
Go fuck yourself, you worthless moron. (If you even know how.)
I'm done with you, you idiot; you're the mold on my bread.
You're the scum in my toilet bowl, a heart of petrified lead.
You make me want to turn inside out, I'm almost blowing chunks.
I'm so sick of you I might just go and fuck one of those Hollywood hunks.
Because that's what you want, isn't it my dear, my sweet, sweet honey.
To justify yourself in thinking I only used you for money.
No, no, I couldn't have loved you! No, that cannot be so;
Even though I BLED FOR YOU more than you can know.
I've confessed my sins, oh my love, the blister on my back
You, the festering wound in my side, the itch I can never scratch
I HATE YOU! You disgust me. You are an infectious disease
Leave me alone, you lethal tormenter;
I'm so fucking tired of seeing you on your knees.
I hope your glasses crack in the sun,
and that you may never find clothes that fit you
I hope some Delilah cuts your hair in your sleep
for vanity does not suit you.
And while Karma is at it, why doesn't she ensure
that when you wake up your shoes have been stolen
and that next time you look in the mirror
Your stupid, guffaw-ing face is swollen.
Oh, my dear, oh love of mine, I hope you rot in Hell
and while you're down there, tell everyone
That I'm the reason you fell.
Author notes
-ANGER OR EXCITEMENT- Whoo... thanks for this contest. I needed this so much. I promise I'm not mean, I just needed to vent. Whoa. I'm surprised at myself. 
I put all my anger into this.
A contest entry
- Emotional Wreck by ToxicSuicide.
750 points, ended January 11, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Angry?!! Show me just how angry you are... by starving-to-survive.
1250 points, ended January 25, 89 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Not only should you be suprised at your self but proud at your self! This is an absoulutly incredible write.
Your anger is just bursting at the seams! I am so impressed.
Every word here has so much power and anger.
This is is a fantastic poem. I am glad you were able to vent your anger this way.
Thank you so much for entering my contest and well done again
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I laughed hard when I read the first two lines. I was like "yes!" The Delilah bit was awesome! Clever, clever. You have like... an overload of comments from me today. I'm really bored at work...
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I'm soooooo glad that you're reading my work. My poetry really doesn't get read at all. I do some shameless promoting, and still there is no feedback or views. Thanks for reading. It means a lot.
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expect more when I'm bored at work tomorrow. Its not like I'm going too much out of my way. Its all very interesting to me
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This is great! Thank you soooo much for entering and good luck!
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damn! i'd hate to be on your angry side. i freakin loved it! tell it like it is girl!
Delusions of granduer, you're living in the stars
you wanted to be a vampire, well suck on this!
You always thought you kissed the right way,
sucking my lips like cocaine through a straw
you made my lips dry, I had to buy chapstick.
tell it!
great write. made me all hyped up lolol.
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Thanks!
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i love it! thats exactly how i feel about my ex boyfriend rite now...
that was more like a manifesto than a poem.....
but it was awesome!!!!! :]]
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holy $hit... that was something good...and long....very pissed off and to the point. that is possibly the angriest poem i've read in years... damn good, too. well done, my friend. bloody well done!
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Thanks so much. I was just so angry and got taken away by it. It's possible that this contest is the best thing to happen to me in a month... other than meeting you, of course.
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lol. thanx. yur a cool friend, too
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