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My Man

My mind set on him
Stay forever
and ever
I love him
Can't get him out of my head
This is more then love
He keeps me locked in his heart
He loves me
His words make me fly
Even if I don't know why
I still want to be with him
Only him
I'm all his
He says he's all mine
He is my prince
I'm his princess....

Author notes

This poem is for the Man I love!!!!

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  • Number 13
    January 9
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    cute :]


  • songstress80
    January 9

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    lovely poem and very cute. every couple should feel like they have found their prince/princess, or king/queen, or god/goddess...very wonderful that you have yours...love can be such a blessing (and a curse...lol!) great work! if you do revise i would suggest mostly just add a few more lines of what he does for you or more of how he treats you (the princess part even?) other than that it's a great write. ..i feel the same way about my man....after all, that is why you titled it "my man". ;0)


  • allygirl87
    January 8
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    awww he must be a very special guy great poem!!

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