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Sky above our heads
blesses us  all in plenty
spreading heart so wide
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Sea before our eyes
professes patience in depth
spearheading soul's breath
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Water besides us
quenches our knowledge's thirst
flowing free to minds
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Earth holds thoughts in tact
brushes weak treasures to sort
blooming in fragrance
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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 9
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    Very calming

    like the contentment, thank you for this entry good luck in my contest
    mm