With droplets dancing
in iridescent illusions;
ringlets of love
splashed a tender pulse
of sweet kisses
upon our souls
accepting hearts heaved
in heavy sighs~
as these silent moments
eternally fell
into memories…
Author notes
Picture option'
image credits:
Love picture - couple hugging in the rain, by orangeacid
obtained from
http://www.lovepicturesoflove.net/
A contest entry
- Embrace~ by poet2angels.
700 points, ended January 13, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful tragedy you have written... loving the alliteration
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Thankyou Nom de Plume
for your sweet words.
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I agree with the angel lady
love the language
best wishes
peace Muddy
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Peace and Blessing to you and yours and thank you for such a gracious comment.
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Sigh~
So much emotion in every line! I just love this!
"accepting hearts heaved
in heavy sighs~
as these silent moments
eternally fell
into memories…"
An ending that left my heart in pieces...
Excellent...TY for entering this moving piece!
Lynda
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Thank you for the Honorable Mention in your contest! I am so honored.
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Beautiful
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Thank you Cowboy!
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