Blue radiant eyes piercingly shine forth,
freezing time before her, in low whispers.
Golden petals encompass this sunflower;
held tightly between tiny, God like hands, so innocent.
Inhaling the smell of euphoria, she begins to smile,
and heavens light brings, comforting joy, so pure;
But for a moment, wishing darkened skies would fade
then, the lightning wouldn't terrify her so. . .
Author notes
Picture Credit: http://s127.photobucket.com/albums/p156/creddy2/?action=view¤t=16f8.jpg
Kind of need some help with "title" idea's also guys...so any suggestions would help.
A contest entry
- Going Crazy Want to Join Me by Starz of Heaven.
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Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - the biggest prewrite contest ever by serenity silvermoon.
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Honorable mention
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You can so tell your a papabear =).
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very well written poem you have here my brother i had two ideas for a title (child of god) or (bring forth) thats what i could come up with i hope that helps
i love the picture as well you used the picture greatly 
s thank you my brother for sharing your lovely poem with me
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I love this poem I love this graphic and you delivered a beautiful poem for it thanks for your entry best wishes always
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awesome poem, good just. i love the imagry in the poem... good luck in the contest.
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Thanks Dez!!! I still don't know what to title this though...
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youll figure something out
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Aw wonderful job on this piece Ademon! Beautiful. Love the concept, and great imagery and flow. Bravo! And good luck to you
♥ Kathraina
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Wonderful work as usual bro!
I love how you captured this picture
with your words here. Good luck
to you and keep it up!
Jeremy0826
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