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Flower of Glass

Crystal petals unfurl,
Their misty surface glistening
With millions of colors that
Shimmer in the sunlight.

With delicate beauty, the
Dazzling flower embraces the world
In its silvery touch, it's brilliant light
Throwing rainbows across the sky.

As the wind caresses the flower,
Tiny seeds that sparkle like diamonds
Blow away into fields, more flowers of crystal
Sprouting wherever the glittery seeds fall.

The sun gleams upon them, like gold,
Its light glinting in the crystal.
The flowers reflect the light and it shines everywhere,
Radiating goodness and beauty into the world.


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  • Beautifully painted!

  • this created a very buetiful image in my head. good use of the imaginary factor. I loved it.


  • Symphony
    February 21

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    Some beautiful imagery in this one -

    You treated the flowers as though they were the most precious things in the world, I absolutely was enthralled by the imagery in the flower made of glass ; fantastic wording!

    Thank you for entering


  • Autumn Rain13
    January 11

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    Truly amazing!!! I am awed at how you described a flower made of glass, i love the line of throwing rainbows in the sky also, excellent work!


  • Denerica
    January 9
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    Throwing rainbows in the sky is the line I like but it is all an equisite write. Blessings.

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