Dear god,
Its me again and you may find my request odd
Because the human life is great
But i feel so far from you
and people in a life from you is full of hate
From the bottom of my heart ever so true
I want my life to be more of you
fill the space in my heart
So that we will never be apart
lord give me wings so that i may fly into space
I don't want to wait another minute before i see your face
I want to reach out & touch your hand, when i'm feeling blue
so God make me a bird, bless me to fly towards you
A contest entry
- make me a bird... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended January 22, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
so what do you think
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A prayer
from the heart. There is longing and purity in these words. I can feel the tone. Blessings to you. Frans
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I believe the God is aware of the fact that you are the one which wants HIM to see..the words here are quite intimate that way..well done...
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