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Should Love Die?

The details of our lives
seem so scattered and confused
things I put you through
shouldn't have to be abused

Our destinies mismatched
delaying promises untold
should have taken more care of you
and let our future unfold

We can take care of each other
and begin to live the lives
keep our faith forever
for our love never dies

Author notes

Prompt: Lifehouse- Whatever it Takes

Happy Early Birthday Amor caecus est!!!!

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  • TabbyCat
    January 8

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    great take on the prompt...it's a good song.
    "keep our faith forever
    for our love never dies
    How romantic.
    I hope someday to find a love like this.