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Finally

I stood there
But you never came
My hopes dieing hard
Till I saw you
Out of the blue
You were running to me
I yelled your name
Tears flowing out with happiness
In your arms now
Kissing me
Hugging me
"I love you."
Escapes your lips over and over
I smile
Say I loved you too
He got down on one knee
"Marry me." He whispered
I nod and cry even harder
"I'm yours, and your mine." I breathed
Finally we were together forever....

Author notes

This is about two loves finally being able to be with each other forever!!!

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  • ShiningNShadows
    January 9

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    Nice job, touching write. It's not quite what I was looking for for the picture, but nice write anyway. Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • jayzway
    January 8
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    this is so beautiful

  • awww i like this poem... full of love... the girl waiting, and finally seeing her love coming for her..... brings tears to my eyes.... <3