It is time for the wicked to be punished
for those who fight for an ideal to awaken
Rising the sword high
Shield ready
Awaiting the first wicked
to bring it down to
the true justice
Awaken from your deep sleep
let your powerfull voice
wake the terror in your enemy rank
Make them flee before you
sending them to where they should be
Purging their sin......
Hurry up and awaken, as this world is slowly fading
erasing itself, disapearing
hurry to awaken, from the depth of your dark world
Open your eyes...... fast
Author notes
Pretty much the cruelty of man, an ode to those who dare to take a step
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A contest entry
- Show me your Courage by Silent Cougar.
1500 points, ended January 31, 15 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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this is reallly good poem thanx for entering good luck
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Wonderful message, and time to open our eyes and take our stance. Blessings.


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Fantastic take on the prompt, and well fitted as a an entry and a call to arms for what is right. I'll leave further feedback should you add more as per AN. Thanks for entering.


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wow... this is really good ^^
great job on it





