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Awaken

It is time for the wicked to be punished
for those who fight for an ideal to awaken

Rising the sword high
Shield ready
Awaiting the first wicked
to bring it down to
the true justice

Awaken from your deep sleep
let your powerfull voice
wake the terror in your enemy rank

Make them flee before you
sending them to where they should be

Purging their sin......

Hurry up and awaken, as this world is slowly fading

erasing itself, disapearing

hurry to awaken, from the depth of your dark world
Open your eyes...... fast

Author notes

Pretty much the cruelty of man, an ode to those who dare to take a step

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  • this is reallly good poem thanx for entering good luck


  • Denerica
    January 15
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    Wonderful message, and time to open our eyes and take our stance. Blessings.


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    January 15

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    Fantastic take on the prompt, and well fitted as a an entry and a call to arms for what is right. I'll leave further feedback should you add more as per AN. Thanks for entering.


  • MaddCuppyCake
    January 8
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    wow... this is really good ^^
    great job on it