We called it our love temple
In those wild teenage years
A place we made such vows
With laughter and some tears
I have repaired time's scaring
Painted white bright and new
Tis the place I am now waiting
This very day just me for you
It's time to renew our love
To dance to nature's song
To act once more like children
In the warm afternoon so long
I will sing once more of our love
Make promises here once more
Hold your hand tight within mine
What magic I do have in store
For tis time for love to be reborn
To find out who we still are
We will spend the night alone here
Underneath the lovers star
A contest entry
- Loves Temple. by Poetryintheblood.
550 points, ended January 12, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Romantic visions of young love play through my mind...
Beautifully created in perfect poetic rhyme.
Much Love and Huge Hugz,
Nicole
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A very uplifting and atmosphertic poem. Thank you
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A lovely poem you have penned of young love. How sweet are your words. A delight to read. Take care. Hugs and Smiles. Sandy
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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What a delight this poem is!
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