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dying hope this world lives

dying hope this world lives in
praying that god will come soon and wipe away the pain
all these people have devoted thier lives to sin
dont care if they will forever remain
inside the hate they hold within
giving themselves little to gain

this world is dying
so many souls throw in the towel before the end
while friends lye crying
others try an pretend
their the only one worth caring about

lost in a world suffering in doubt
left to defeat the mistakes of our elders
how will we ever make it out
they call us failures
as they scream and shout

Little hope we linger within
battling the world for the lost souls
who are missing their life's they have yet to begin
and its starting to taking a tole
as they fall faster in to their dying hole

struggling to fight for another day
where do we put this through to an end
how long must we stay just okay








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  • This is a very powerful poem, i love the line, "struggling to fight for another day", its so true, i read some other poems and i want to add you as a fav, xxx


  • NeverRegret
    January 9
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    THIS ISNT DONE YET