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Nightmare

Missing image
You'll never know what you'll find
On those dark shores

Those shores of wonder
Of curiosity
Of unknowns

You journey throughout the night
Dreams
Hopes
Fantasies filling your mind

You arrive only to find a

Black
Bleak
Blank

Nightmare

Author notes

Not positive what this is about exactly...

Picture prompt! http://www.loreleiweb.com/28/fant/00.jpg

A contest entry

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  • Maybe.I.Am.Broken.
    January 9, 2009

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    Brilliant!!!!!

    This is a fantastic write!
    I used the same pic. of this, only for a different contest(to see the poem, check out my poem "Fallen Angel")
    I really liked this write,
    you described the prompt well.

    Keep writing

    Annie


  • Miss Chievous
    January 9, 2009
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    That was awesome!
    I loved it all!


  • Firequeen
    January 8, 2009
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    well i don't know either
    But this was GREAT!!!
    Loved it.
    good luck in the contest


  • Faded Existence
    January 8, 2009

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    ha.. nor am I

    but I loved it!! Wow... it's awesome! Lol... wish i could find a less cliche word ha..

    thanks so much for your entry and best of luck!

    -Faded


  • x-sweet-sunshine-x
    January 8, 2009

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    Neither am I...

    But good poem! I really like the last few stanzas. Good luck in the contest!

    ...!...



    -Paradox

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