Touching,
saying nothing
as His empathy speaks
for those we hold near and dear
during times of trouble and dissension.
For He is the Lord Almighty,
embracing our wishes
with compassion,
touching.
Author notes
Rictameter
Syllables: 2-4-6-8-10-8-6-4-2 (first and last words are the same)
In a list
A contest entry
- Pre-Writes Galore/no gold yet by piccola.
400 points, ended January 19, 100 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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a beautiful rictameter, thank you for entering
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Yes this is good for the theme you have chosen.
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nice form here
These I really don't understand well... But I respect anyone who can write them. This is a nice prayer but a personal one and if you remember I did ask for a prayer for the world... not a personal one. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest. -
well writen
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A simple assessment of the nature of God and his attributes of loving kindness and empathy for his creatures made in his image. We are reminded of times when we have no words but his Spirit groans with ours, and communicates that which we cannot pray with words.
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I only need two of your poems, thanks
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A lovely, well-written poem rife with meaning and truth. Thank you.
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I like this a lot. As to form it is great and the image is beautiful. The subject matter is nice too. Beautifully done.
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A most potent and most well done poetic form, and I loved it a ton!!
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amen.
Love, Lane
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