She learned the study of languages; linguistics,
and he specialized in cardiology he could define
each lineament of her heart and she translated
what it meant.
Author notes
just something i wrote in French class
not that good
S T A R G A Z E R .
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He was mine.
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If we are lucky we find that perfect match that can read our emotions and in turn we can do the same. In real life it's a lot of compromise and a desire to understand one another, without that, I'm not sure what you have, but it can't be a good situation. Nicely written.
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This is good
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Great write, it a very intersting way to see a relationship and true. I liked how you said, "he could define each lineament of her heart and she translated what it meant." Beautifully written.
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Very Nice
A very interesting and excellent way at looking at a relationship. Beautiful. Good write! -
i like this part the most..
"and he specialized in cardiology he could define
each lineament of her heart and she translated
what it meant."
i like this a lot though.
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I like the line, "he specialized in cardiology, he could define each lineament of her heart, and she translated what it meant." Excellent!!! Just extremely good. I would recommend keeping a notebook of lines like that one, and possibly using it in a story or another poem!!! Wonderful!
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Thta's excellent, actually. AI love the way it's like poetry prose...
I like the idea of the thought behind it.
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Great work here
You have such a way of bringing such a muse to the reader please continue
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I like the undercurrent of love I felt in this piece. I enjoyed the read. Yours,
Gypsy.
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Very beautiful... like the lineament's of this
Ken
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The heart isn't always so clearly read. Though sometimes it has a very strong pulse.
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