I’m crying out,
I want to hear your voice.
As I look into your eyes,
I see a single choice.
The clock on the wall,
Goes by so slow.
Every second without you,
It’s like a repeated blow.
You are everything to me,
Every breath, every word.
I want to keep you to me,
But you fly away like a bird.
Please don’t leave me,
I don’t want to be alone.
Every night I wait,
Sitting quietly by the phone.
As I realize your call
Will never come.
My eyes fill with tears,
My heart becomes numb.
I’m crying out louder,
I want you to hear MY voice.
As you look into MY eyes,
You’ll see MY single choice.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Well done Jenn, "love is everywhere... but in the wrong place!" A bit depressing this Jenn, I'll have to order an extra box of tissues!...ian.
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Hm- definitely a cliff hanger poem. Well written darlin- I like your rhyme scheme and how you say you want them to hear your voice, rather than you want to hear theirs. That is a twist that I don't see very often in poems. LOVE YOU
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Ooooooh! whats the choice? is it over? lol good poem babe!
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