Beloved Beauty, I found you.
True, it took me a while, but it happened.
Praying for you worked, surprisingly. My eyes sparkling
With the gift of your loving attitude.
The best. I craved you before I was alive.
I was nothing, life didn’t exist. For it doesn’t
without you anyway. As I waited and waited
and waited for you to arrive. My mind went crazy
when I met you, punching its pathetic fist in the air.
Cruelty, it finds its way around love’s map. But screaming
nooooooo, it disappears just like that. I couldn’t have done it
without you. I’d just like to thank my mum, my friends, you...
Love love. It’s a simple rule, one we can stick to. I stabbed
that old life right in its back. Indie girl. Indie boy. Perfect match?
We’re meant to be.
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this is a wonderful uplifitng write
thank you for sharing this with us and keep up the good work, i enjoyed this poem veyr much and hope that it brings pleasure to many others
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well done
your love shines through
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very heartfelt
I just felt this today.... you spoke the words my heart feels right now.... it disappears just like that I too prayed..now I just wait. -
This reminded me of something that just recently happened in my life. I was having doubts about my faithfulness in my lover, not because of anything he had done, but because of my own paranoia and a deep self hatered.
But I've learned that I can't go throughout my life not trusting him, just because of things that I only think are happening, or that I am afraid of happening. So I shut down my barriers, and I told him how much he means to me, and how much I truly love him.
And when he responded, he wrote similar words:
"i understand the whole thinking about the past part, because ive realized so many things in life, that are wasted, and well ive wasted several years and time out of my life, just to find u...there is so much detail i can fit into my life that it isnt really funny anymore because it proves that its all fucked up
but if it was the only way id come accross you id do it all over again... just to end up w/ u."
then, at the bottom of the letter, he wrote:
"love is not enough to describe how i feel about u... u are my love, my fire, my motivation, my passion.... "
Anyway, this made me think about him. Almost perfectly discribing what he said. It kind of made me understand the gravity of his words, and I want to thank you for that. Excellent work.
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Ahh, writing about the loved one. Sometimes so hard to do. You did it well. Not overwhelming at all, i dig it.
nice work
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