life comes together in a blink of an eye
but yet life changes in a split second
there is no rhyme or reason why life does this
one moment you could be on top of your school work
the the next second you get a bad grade on a paper
and you feel as if your world is crushing down behind you
BUT ISNT HIS LIFE?
one moment you could be having lots of fun with your friends
when sudddenly you get a call saying your friend was hit by a drunk driver
the pain inside of you is just unberrible and you want to scream and shout but you cant find the strength
BUT ISNT THIS LIFE?
In december you could be celebrating the holidays with your dad and he is healthy and enjoying life with no worries in sight
then just over a month later you find out he died- of cancer with no warning signs
you want to blame God for what He has done, its unfair, and you cant believe it happend
BUT ISNT THIS LIFE?
did you ever want to scream just because of everything
that is happening in the world around you?
YES you say
BUT ISNT THIS LIFE?
The problems are real and everything in life happends for a reason and everyone has to take life in strides
Author notes
well the material in this poem is about stuff that happend around me with friends none of this really had directly effected me and i guess this poem is a tribute to those who have delt with any of those issues ( or close to those issues)THIS IS A DIFFERENT STYLE OF WRITTING FOR ME ( OF POETRY AT LEAST ) SO BE HONEST...
What do you guys think of it? ( please be honest)
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SAYA
life has a twist to it and your right everything happens for a reason some things happen and it hurts you to the point you just want to give UPAND stop trying but if u think ABOUT IT IN THE END GOOD THINGS WILL HAPPEN TOO... -
Very well done
Indeed it is life we never know what tomorrow shall bring so we mucty make the best of every day to tell ones we love them and know it could be the last time we see them so embrace life with all you got
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