You are my black magic lover...
Shadows got you through daylight
And so you, my four leaf clover,
Shall now get me through the night.
Dark spells you cast and you're still casting;
Weak as I am, I easily gave in.
But as you fade and leave me lusting,
Illusions of a dream grow thin.
Don't turn your back on me, baby!
To love you now I think I might,
So why not take that chance and maybe
Love me just once more tonight?
Author notes
This poem is inspired by Santana's "Black Magic Woman". Since I am a straight girl myself, I couldn't do without rephrasing it so I could relate. If you haven't listened to this song yet, I clearly say you should. It's a must!
A contest entry
- Any kind of love by Dorian-Gray.
400 points, ended January 11, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
It's been a while. Do I still have it?
Comments
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how come youre so freaking talented???? i envy you!!!!
i really liked this piece. it was well written. you have serious skill. never stop writing
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So why not take that chance and maybe
Love me just once more tonight?
I really love these closing lines. Thanks for entering. Great write. -
Yes you must still have it. This is great. I relate to it. very nice write.
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It's very sweet and lovely poem
I loved it.
Nice rhyming and good rhythm.
Well done
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it very good i really like it
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Good Poem. Something I would write....but I think you wrote it better. Awesome.
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This is very imaginative and a very talented work. I love it!
Thanks for sharing
Ariel
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I think you definatly have it.You have loads of talant I only wish you would have wroe more of it.You are very gifted at writing you should never give it up.
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Nice work
Love the original song so I had to take a look.
You have a natural talent and I like the way it rhymes Well done
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This Is just great you have done so well with it and Black Magic Woman rocks, I'm such a Santana fan
Two thumbs up and ticks all the boxes
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I don't know the original song, but I enjoyed the poem.
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