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This Rose

The Roses shaded lattice
Is lonely

Hearts-worth of red color
Wasted

The Hermit in my heart
Sleeping

This Rose I stand next to
Is yours

The lattice in darkness
Is longing

The soul of the lover
Is dreams

I will wait here forever
Blind

Author notes

Inspired by my wife, this work is for Her.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 10

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    This is indeed a piece from the bottom of the heart..touched me and made me impressed as well..well done my friend..


  • shadowraith
    January 8

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    brilliant

    simplistic beauty i love it your wife would be or is
    very proud
    The Hermit in my heart
    Sleeping
    love these lines