Most seem to think True Love
[does not exist]
They are wrong, deceived
[mistaken]
Love, True Love is here
it's seen within a new born babe
[its parents eyes]
two lovers, engaged in holy matrimony
[souls unite]
Love, true love is here
waiting for you to find
Patience + sincere
Your heart will unite with mine.
I know True Love exists, deep within my soul
[fears of inadequacy no longer has a hold]
Love, true love is here,
[on bended knee I bow]
All the more real, two lovers
[within Loves Grasp]
I ask..... [say yes?]
Author notes
does true love exist? I think it does, this was written really abstract and very, very, very different then what I usually write but the message is still the same...I believe in love, true love and it's existence.
picture found google images: http://img29.picoodle.com/img/img29/9/8/10/f_TheLoveOmenm_74ccd51.jpg
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Comments
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Actually, I really like it. Those were great examples when people whine and complain about not finding love. But with a more sweet underlining meaning at the end, bet lots of men would like to use that to purpose to a skeptical woman hehe
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Utterly romantic ~
This is so beautifully romantic I found myself smiling throughout and believing in love all over again
A fine poem indeed to read
Best of Luck
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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Loved it, the style was unique and refreshing and I do believe true love exists, I am living proof of it.
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This is beautiful, and mostly yes I believe true love exists, I just have a hard time accepting that I deserve it. any way. wonderful poem. and emotion.
Kristi -
Ah yes, i believe true love does exist aswell,
but the hard part is finding the special 'someone' to share it with.
Brilliantly said my friend
All the best to you in the contest
Ken
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This is another incredible write!
Very beautiful and thought provoking
words here. Well done and good luck
to you in this contest!
Jeremy0826 -
This is an amazing poem. I have to say i am one of those people who dont believe in true love. But again it is a beautiful poem, i always like to read what you write.
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Such a beautiful poem !!! Very well written dear friend. Love it !!! I do believe in TRUE LOVE and SOUL MATES. I just haven't found mine yet Or maybe I have... Time will tell... I'll invite you to our wedding if it works out.
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I believe that true love does exist a type of love that knows no problem that is to big in life always shining loves light is an amazing gift when you find it thanks for sharing be well.
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Thanks sweetie...this is still really abstract...I'm not quite sure I like the way I wrote it...
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I like it don't you dare change it lol
I will kick you
lol
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