you just got asked a question
one you never seem to answer
always so indecisive
you really need to figure this out
it's quite a big priority
just lay it all on the line
we really can't wait much longer
well, mirror ?
Author notes
yeah i know its pretty bad.
A contest entry
- 8-Line Poems by Daire.
550 points, ended January 23, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent:
Very deep.
I love it.
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ooops i missed that "to". thanks for the heads up.
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This has a nice twist at the end and comes together well in the last few lines. One thing: 'seem answer' in line 2 should maybe be 'seem to answer'.
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i think you could make this better and you should because basically it has some depth in its contents.you show a very expressive image. my best to you in the contest.
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