catching trains off the cuff
where memories find their simple place
leaving one
looking around the corner
as one runs down the track
experiences found
within life's surprises
rising into the sun
where dreams
shine into the horizon
conceding yesterdays
a moment at a time.
Jan. 8, 2009
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We can avoid much disappoint by living in the now for that cuts down
on expectations and puts to bed many false hopes we would tend to
have. It might also make for a smoother trip since we wouldn't be
getting off at every train station to see if this was where "it"
was at...
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Another beautiful poem, you're on a row my friend. Keep them coming, this poem speaks wisdom and its filled with grace. Well done.
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I really like the way you set this up. It shows the forward movement of life, while learning from life's experiences.
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I like this. It gives the impression of always moving, and always having more to learn and time to grow..
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i like the imagery
evoked by the way you placed the words in this poem along wiht the way they flowed..you're a hipcat.. do you know that?
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