My beautiful garden,
Has a secret to whisper,
If you are too loud you won’t hear a thing,
If you are very quiet you can hear them sing,
The flowers dance such passion of colours,
Colours not even seen,
That we don’t know,
And are beautiful and beam,
My beautiful garden.
A contest entry
- Nature Short Pieces by misticmoonlite.
600 points, ended January 9, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think?
Comments
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wow
i wanna go in that garden lol -
Wonderful imagery.
You have a very special and beautiful garden here.
A great write.
There's a book called "The Secret Life Of Plants"
This book documents responses by plants to music, positive and negative thoughts etc, an interesting read...and no surprise to read in it that they flourish with thoughts of love...AND struggle to survive with negative thoughts, even when given the exact same conditions...water, sunlight, feed with nutrients etc.
Your poem brought the memory of this book to mind...because you have .."A Beautiful Garden"
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oh I believe
when plants blow in the slowest of waves,they speak gently to anyone or thing that will listen, thank you for this gentle entry to my contest, good luck
MM
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