Her hearts melting
laughing, and romance
make it
All the more real, two lovers
[within Loves Grasp]
He bows, bended knee
She cries. . .
Yes, Eternally. . . .
Author notes
Let your love flow in your poetry,
express in 25 words or less..
free, or formed
even haiku,
as you all know
I dislike bashing, swearing, against anyone one...
place for that in other contests...
Have fun...let me see love in friendships, spousal
or promises of tomorrow....
A contest entry
- Short Love Poems (PW'S OPEN ) by misticmoonlite.
650 points, ended January 12, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - the biggest prewrite contest ever by serenity silvermoon.
900 points, ended January 18, 362 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What is one thing that stood out in this poem?
Comments
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Hood Winked!!
There is power in love and you have captured the love. The imagery and descriptive expression blend well into thoughts as you direct your readers minds.Love eternal entwined hearts understand the power. Your words speak out.
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I really loved this poem. gives a strong image.
Great writers don't need many words. -
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thank you for the beautiful and amazing comment.
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ROMANCE,LOVE
Aand the emotions that entwine does happen and you treat it with RESPECT
thank you for this entry, good luck
MM
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Thank you for hosting this contest! Best wishes in Judging!
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*Sigh* Yes what a dreamy piece! I wonder if it still happens like this today.
Best wishes in the contest.
Gaylene
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It does in my heart, and I can only hope when I propose to the woman that I love...
thank you for the beautiful comment!
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With only 25 words you sure said a love
and left a great picture of love in my mind.
I love your title and imagery in this write.
All the best to you and keep up the great
work here bro!
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Thanks Jeremy your words are always kind and your spirit is golden always helping me with mispelled words that I tend to miss... God Bless!
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this is very beautiful -- i love the moment & emotion conveyed in this poem, best of luck
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Thank you dear...
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This is simply beautiful
good luck to you in the contest
Fire
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Thank you so much!
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this is amazing, good luck.
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Thank you Dez!!!
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This is abs.beautiful I love it good luck to you in the contest best wishes always be well
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