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Passions Of The Mind

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To drift into a dream Divine,
of silks and satins embrace my mind .
Dreams of such passion embraces my soul,
with new lovers each night I hold.
Eyes wide open yet hidden within,
softly with each embrace my lips entice with a grin.
Purring as the cat where time stands still,
and love is beckoned at will.

Whispers of sweet nothings
breath upon my ear brings a chill,
such sensual smells the mind brings at will.
Heart rushing from the excitement through lovers lust,
its a time a princess feels the thrust.
She quivers and small beads of sweat adorns her brow ,
in such entangled embrace she softly vows .
to love and bring magic to ones so fair,
and runs her fingers through her hair .

Spinning as she wakens,
from the dream so alive.
Se looks about and a teardrop,
so released from her sad eyes.
She lifts herself up
and wraps her arms about herself,
now once again feeling like
the porcelain doll upon her shelf.

The doorbell rings
and she wraps the sheet tightly about,
and moved fluidly to the door,
to see who it could be for sure,
As she opened the door
she drew in a breath of life,
and was thrust into a vision
through tear filled eyes.

Dreams we feel are just a passing
of the mind at play,
coming to she whispers no way.
As he touches her skin she falls his way,
and is enveloped within his love in such a display.

Whispering she softly says
wake up I cant take any more,
and a voice was returned within her ears Am-ore.
She reaches out and touches his lips trembling bliss,
to find dreams do come true and sealed with a kiss.

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  • abu nuwas
    May 30

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    Not my cup of tea

    V emotional, and dreamy. But it would be so much improved by a little tidying. Some of the rhyming is a little trite. 'Entices' should be 'entice'. I like happy endings tho'!


  • Cherrylv
    April 12
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    Dreams can be wonderful
    Cherry xxxxx


  • Faded Existence
    January 13
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    applaud


  • penman gold member
    January 9
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • paulcreates silver member
    January 9

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    You are a sensual flower. You write erotica the way I do although I don't write it that often. It's written from the mind - the body always follows. Good write!

    Paul


  • Moonlightdragon gold member
    January 9

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    Sensual words which reach out from the penned passion to touch my mind ,ever line weaves a spell of magic. The image created is a haunting invitation to the comfort of crimson satin sheets and the promises of loves reward.

  • Thank you for your beautifully penned entry, good luck in my contest, Josie

  • michaeline
    January 8

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    This is atimeless piece of writing.Anyone can relate.The slkeness of your words run like there is no ending.liked the title you chose and the backround.You are a very skilled writer with loads of talant.


  • maralisa silver member
    January 8
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    aw wow a very beautiful poem patty I love your rhyme good luck inthe contestmaralisa


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    January 8

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    Wow my Guardian Angel you have found sensual with a capital SSSSSSS
    Fantastic and beautiful
    I loved reading your words
    Good luck to you hun
    Much love Julie xxx


  • StarEyes
    January 8

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    This is like you were reading right into my heart! What a wonderful read, and makes realize that yes, dreams do come true! I feel that sometimes... Great job!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Ademon
    January 8

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    your beautiful eccentric writes always bring chills and a smile to my face! I love it! good luck in the contest!

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