i hate this game
society plays
where it screams
without remorse
"become like us"
"fall in line with the rest"
when the simple truth is..
it's not who i want to be.
Author notes
eh. i'm rusty.
A contest entry
- 8-Line Poems by Daire.
550 points, ended January 23, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like this. Excellent title and it flows really well. The last line doesn't fit brilliantly but the sentiment is spot-on.
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i can feel you on this. you said so much with such few words but those few words convey a strong message. you write with spirit. my best to you in the contest.
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It certainly difficult for those of us who couldn't fit in, even if we wanted to .
Enjoyed your write.
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not bad, you proved a point, added some description and made it work in 8 small lines.
good job
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well said
great write...good luck to you
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Wow~
So true and Powerful message You have presented here
Especially with the conformity and what society perceives to be- some trying to *force* change
Excellent write
Happy to see Your quill dancing
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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wow
true say good lcuk in the contest
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